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The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart depicts the information about in the USA
different
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 number of species are used for animal testing.The units are calibrated in percentage.
Overall
, rabbits species are outnumbered
in
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 the testing purpose
while
 sheep are insignificant.
To begin
 with, in
USA
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 laboratory 38.7% of rabbits and 27.7%
hamsters
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 are highly used for testing
purpose
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.
Moreover
, 10.2 % of
dogs
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dog
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speices
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species
 are utilised for research. 9.3% of pigs which is 1% less than dogs and 0.3
percent
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 reduced for primates than pigs species.
Finally
, the sheep are empty .It is not used for examination of animal testing in the country USA.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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