The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart depicts the information about in the USA
different
number of species are used for animal testing.The units are calibrated in percentage.
Change the article
a different
the different
Overall
, rabbits species are outnumbered in
the testing purpose Change preposition
for
while
sheep are insignificant.
To begin
with, in USA
laboratory 38.7% of rabbits and 27.7% Correct article usage
the USA
hamsters
are highly used for testing Change preposition
of hamsters
purpose
. Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
Moreover
, 10.2 % of dogs
Fix the agreement mistake
dog
speices
are utilised for research. 9.3% of pigs which is 1% less than dogs and 0.3 Correct your spelling
species
percent
reduced for primates than pigs species. Change the spelling
per cent
Finally
, the sheep are empty .It is not used for examination of animal testing in the country USA.Submitted by rd.prasanna569 on
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