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The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia.
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The two charts depict information about marital status in
Canada
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 and Australia divided into six and five ranges, respectively measured by percentage. At first glance, most people in these two countries either are or have been married,
while
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 the percentage of divorce is low. More people are single (separated, divorced, widowed, never married) than are married in
Canada
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. As can be seen, Canadian marriages have just over a quarter of the proportion, and the chart illustrates that they are more likely to end in separation than Australian ones.
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, 32% of Canadians are married,
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 Australia has 14% more in
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 tax. As observed, the rate of divorced people in
Canada
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 and Australia is low.
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 the Australian portion is double the Canadian, the figure (2%) is still low.
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, the single and widowed range is roughly the same between these countries, with a slight difference of 3% more in
Canada
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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