The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia.
The two charts depict information about marital status in
Canada
and Australia divided into six and five ranges, respectively measured by percentage. At first glance, most people in these two countries either are or have been married,
while
the percentage of divorce is low. More people are single (separated, divorced, widowed, never married) than are married in
Canada
. As can be seen, Canadian marriages have just over a quarter of the proportion, and the chart illustrates that they are more likely to end in separation than Australian ones.
In addition
, 32% of Canadians are married,
while
Australia has 14% more in
this
tax. As observed, the rate of divorced people in
Canada
and Australia is low.
Although
the Australian portion is double the Canadian, the figure (2%) is still low.
Furthermore
, the single and widowed range is roughly the same between these countries, with a slight difference of 3% more in
Canada
.
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