Topic 9: In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Many

people

claim that in the future printed

newspapers

books

will be replaced by ebooks. Personally, I partly agree with

this

statement.

To begin

with, the online publication has many advantages. First of all, online reading materials are more affordable financially because they do not need paper, which is an expensive item.

People

can easily access the copy version of the book they want.

Moreover

, many

people

read online

books

because of their convenience. They are easily available and only need 1 electronic device

such

as a cellphone or laptop to store countless

books

For example

for its benefits, a Harry Potter book is sold in stores for more than 700,000 VND,

while

a copy of the book with similar content is sold online for only 60,000 VND. Despite the benefits mentioned above, there will still be many

people

using

books

or printed

newspapers

Firstly

although

it is easy to access, for some it is a problem. For the elderly, they update the news by reading

newspapers

, but accessing the web to read

newspapers

is a difficult problem.

Secondly

, there will always be

people

who prefer to buy printed

newspapers

and

books

as their hobby. Reading free articles on a screen is oftentimes a test of concentration

due to

the disturbance from constant pop-up advertisements or message notifications or just because their hobby is flipping the pages to read and enjoy the smell of

books

. In conclusion, I partly agree with the statement that

people

will no longer pay for printed

newspapers

and

books

Mon Jul 17 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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255 words

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