You recently bought a piece of sports equipment from an online store . When you first used the piece of sports equipment , you find a problem with it . Write a letter to the manager of the online store , In your letter 1. Describe the problem with the piece of sports equipment 2. say what happened because of the problem 3. explain what you would like the company to do .

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my resentment for the exercise
cycle
which I purchased from your website. I am Jaskaran Singh Awal, a resident of New Delhi, my order Id is ####. I received the
cycle
yesterday for my gym.
However
, when one of my clients was using it, unfortunately, a paddle got jammed, and it was not working even after losing the chainset.
Further
, when the paddle got jammed, my client was at high speed and it resulted in knee injuries to him
then
we rushed him to the doctor nearby, where the doctor recommended bed rest for a week.
Therefore
, I require you to replace the
cycle
as soon as possible since I have only one
cycle
in my gym, and my clients are facing issues because almost all of my clients use the
cycle
daily. Awaiting your prompt reply. Yours Faithfully, Jaskaran Singh Awal
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • anticipation
  • defect
  • malfunction
  • inconvenience
  • disappointment
  • remedy
  • replacement
  • refund
  • resolution
  • patronage
  • loyalty
  • customer service
  • timely
  • efficient
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