You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. They have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing in with regards to
request
for a different room for me to stay. Add an article
a request
the request
Currently
I am staying at block 421 on the 4th floor which is opposite the basketball court. I have a Add a comma
,Currently
room- mate
who is a Correct your spelling
roommate
first year
student in our college and he Add a hyphen
first-year
has
moved in 3 months ago. After his moving in, I regret to mention Unnecessary verb
apply
this
but I was unable to focus on my work
due to
many reasons.
Firstly
, I do have work from home
Add a hyphen
work-from-home
arrangement
on certain days in Fix the agreement mistake
arrangements
a
week and I always have kept my Correct article usage
the
room- mate
in Correct your spelling
roommate
loop
. Add an article
the loop
a loop
However
, he will bring in his friends to chit- chat
and play games together. Correct your spelling
chit-chat
This
noise has been disruptive for me to interact during my online meetings.
Secondly
, he likes to sleep early due to
his college lessons in the morning and I have to work
online at late nights
as my company do follow American timing. Fix the agreement mistake
night
Due to
such
work
arrangement, I am unable to switch on the room lights for better lighting and I stick to an old table lamp. That Correct article usage
a work
do
affect my eyesight when I am online for quite some time.
I am sure that he is still growing up to be a young adult and his hygiene is not up to standards. He tends to share my desk and sometimes Change the verb form
does
misplace
my books or things Correct subject-verb agreement
misplaces
elsewhere
. I do warn him to rectify his behavior but he is not making much improvement.
So, I will be grateful if you could provide me a
single occupancy room that can boast a conducive environment to Add the preposition
with a
work
and stay. In addition
, I am flexible with rooms on any floor and sharing bathroom
will not be an issue for me too. I am looking forward to Correct article usage
a bathroom
hear
from you soon.Change the verb form
hearing
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