In Britain when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other people where the nurses look after them.sometimes the government has to pay for this care.who do you think should pay,the government or the family?

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practice of arranging

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folks to stay in a welfare home and hiring nurses to take care of them has been in the British system for quite some time. I do agree that

government

do cover the expenses for senior citizens if they are unable to pay

due to

unforeseen circumstances. I would like to argue that both

families

and

government

hold

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fair share of responsibilities to take care of

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senior citizens.

Firstly

, we need to

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our old folks as they were the ones who form the backbone of our society. They toiled hard to build the nation and

families

so

families

should be responsible to cover the expenses of their old family

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in welfare homes.

For instance

, in Singapore,

families

arrange for hospice to take care of their ailing old family members in case they are not able to support them at home.

This

will not lead the seniors

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depression or sorrow. Arrangement of old

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home

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will assist the seniors to form close bonds with their age group and lead a healthy and ageing lifestyle.

Secondly

,

government

holds the highest form of

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to protect and treasure its people and resources in the best interest. In that way, there might be

families

who are struggling with financial difficulties

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not able to pay or cover their seniors’ expenses in welfare homes. By providing a subsidy or any financial aid,

families

’ burden has been lessened and it does not deprive old

folks’

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good retirement years with their friends. In conclusion, its of

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paramount importance for both

government

and

families

to provide stable financial support to the seniors in order for them to spend their lustre years in peace.