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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that thay find the most interesting. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Choosing
school
subjects
 is a controversial topic
also
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and also
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 confusing for many people.
While
 some believe that
teenagers
 should study all
subjects
, others support the theory of choosing the
subjects
 they are passionate about. I am a proponent of the second viewpoint that
teenagers
 have to follow their desire with regard to
the
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school
subjects
.
To begin
 with, some opinions say that they should study all
school
subjects
, they claim that
teenagers
 should have a wide range of knowledge about all aspects of life,
therefore
, gaining
this
 valuable experience
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in
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an
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 early age will be found in studying,
for instance
, students would learn about first aid tasks,
moreover
, some basics about civil
defense
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such
 as encountering a potential accident or a natural disaster from studying these
subjects
 at
school
,
hence
, they do not need to be specialists in these fields to get
this
 experience.
Additionally
, some
school
 curriculums aim to raise learner's awareness about the dangers of overusing
of
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technology, students should be exposed to
such
 topics whether they are good at these
subjects
 or not.
On the other hand
, some
teenagers
 find learning a boring process,
hence
,
this
 concept pushes them to believe that the final degree and the certificates
having
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 a crucial importance
not
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,not
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 the education itself,
hence
, they should be free to choose
subjects
 they tend to learn to fuel their passion about learning.
For example
, In Egypt, some
teenagers
 participate in scientific projects
while
 they are still studying,
this
 is
beacuse
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because
 they showed great efforts in science experiments at their schools and all of
this
 is a result of making them choose to study what they like. In conclusion,
although
 concentrating on all
school
subjects
 has a significant value for
teenagers
, focusing on the
subjects
 they are good at is more important.
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