The line graph illustrates three different kinds of crimes that occurred in Newport City center between 2003 and 2012.
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one-decade
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, the crime rates of car theft and robbery did not change remarkably during this
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the rate of burglary dropped in this
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amount
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so, it stood at just roughly 1300 in 2012.
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the fluctuation of car theft did not remarkably change from 2003 until 2005 by about 2800 number of
incidents, there was a significant decline in 2006 and stood at just about 2100. Correct quantifier usage
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Furthermore
, there was a margin fluctuation for the robbery in the period
of mention so that, the maximal and minimal number of that did not exceed 900 and 500 respectively.Submitted by amirhsina on
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