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Nowadays , more andmorw people decide to have children later in their life. what are the reasons? Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

#andmorw #people #children #life #outweigh
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modern
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 era,
young
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the young
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 generation take
decision
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decisions
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 for family planning when they become mature because it is one of the most important
decision
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decisions
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 in
married
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a married
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 couple’s
life
. The main reason to have a
baby
 in middle age is that
well educated
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well-educated
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 people give preference to meet their financial
goal
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goals
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. I will discuss my views in detail in subsequent paragraphs.
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 with, younger people mainly focus on
that
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apply
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how they can
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be financial
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financial
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financially
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well settled
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well-settled
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. Most
of
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the
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people, after completing their
education
, do some jobs and get married either love or arrange. But they do not think about
to have
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 a child unless they become financially responsible. Because it is difficult to raise a
baby
 without having sufficient funds. When
couple
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a couple
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become
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becomes
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 financially independent they
do
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not only give
better
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a better
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life style
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lifestyle
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 to their children but
also
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are also
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 able to give
high standard
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high-standard
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education
 in international schools or colleges.
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, if a child
want
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 to become a doctor after completing their higher
education
then
 it is only possible when parents are financially strong.
As per
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 my perspective, when
couple
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a couple
the couple
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decide
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 to have a
baby
 later
then
 it has more benefits than cons. No doubt, every
parents
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parent
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 always try to give quality
education
 and
best
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the best
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 facilities to their children even
they
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if they
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 become parents
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at in
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in
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an
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 early age but if they become financially strong, they do not have any burden, how they will raise their children. Meanwhile,
relationship
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the relationship
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 between husband and wife
become
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becomes
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 stronger because they spend quality time with each other.
To conclude
,
married
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a married
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 couple prefer to have a
baby
 after
few
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a few
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 years of their married
life
 because they do not want to be financially
depend
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 on someone.
Moreover
, it would help to make their bond strong and live
pleased
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a pleased
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life
.
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