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Some people think that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people’s behavior. What is your opinion?

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Some
people
 think that violence on television and in computer
games
 has a damaging effect on society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on
people
’s behaviour. What is your opinion? In
this
 era, the usage of video
games
 on different
types
 of play stations is increasing day by day.
Children
 enjoy these modern sorts of
games
 with full concentration. Many
games
 are related to violence, like fighting with each other in groups. The effects of these
types
 of
games
 are too dangerous for society.
However
, fewer
people
 think that these
types
 of
games
 do have not any major effects on an individual’s behaviour. In the following paragraphs, I will explain the reasons and my opinion, about how these
types
 of
games
 destroy
children
's lives in our society. In the beginning,
according to
 fewer
people
,
children
 play different sorts of
games
 in different ways. Few
children
 prefer to play
games
 on computers and mobile phones but others play on the latest play stations. Modern
types
 of
games
 based on fighting themes like attacking and fighting with each other etc. PUBG game is the best example. In
this
 game, a battlefield creates and 100
people
 are dropped on
this
 battlefield, and they are in the form of groups and each group contain four members. They all fight with the help of different
types
 of latest arms with each other. In 2020 a crime was reported in Lahore Pakistan, a boy killed her mother and sister with a gun same to
this
 game theme. After investigating
this
 case, it was clear that the boy plays a lot of PUBG and now he was not mentally stable. The same scenario
also
 happened in New Zealand where a man killed many
people
 in a mosque.
Nevertheless
, other
people
 say that these
types
 of
games
 do not create any bad impact on the life of an individual.
Furthermore
, these
games
 increase the power of command and increase the decision power in the
children
.
To conclude
, the bad effects of these are overweight. Because many incidents have occurred owing to these
types
 of violent
games
.
However
, there are just a few benefits of these
games
 like increasing the decision power.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • desensitize
  • aggressive behavior
  • perceptions
  • correlation
  • individual susceptibility
  • media literacy
  • critical thinking
  • interpret
  • regulating
  • negative effects
  • balance
  • societal measures
  • impact
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