The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph represents the survey results, which identify the
reasons
why people
moved to the capital city of a specific country.
Overall
, the huge amount of people
moving to the capital city is about employment
. Conversely
, the number
of people
moving for the reason of adventure
is a small number
. The amount of people
with a reason to study has increased extremely over time.
From 2000 to 2005, Moving for the purpose of employment
had risen extremely up to 85000. Also
, the number
of people
who move for studying increased enormously to almost 50000 in 2005. By contrast
, the number
of people
for reasons
of family and adventure
increased slightly in 2005, accounting for 15000 and 13000 in order. From 2005 to 2010, the number
of people
with reasons
for employment
and studying increased continuously to about 90000 and 55000 in order. The number
of people
moving for adventure
increased slightly and constantly to 15000 in 2010. Surprisingly, the number
of people
with reasons
of family and friends rose enormously to about 20000 in 2010. From 2010 to 2015, the number
of people
moving with reasons
of employment
turned down approximately 85000. Also
, the number
of those with reasons
to study rose to 85000 as well. The number
of people
with reasons
of family and adventure
remains stable, accounting for about 20000 and 15000.Submitted by dondollaraus on
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