The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph demonstrates the survey results that
people
give the
people
reasons for moving to live in the capital city of one country.
Overall
,
people
move
to another capital city because of work. Studying is another reason why
people
need to
move
there
while
family and adventure is not the reason why
people
need to
move
there. The survey results show that in 2000, 60000
people
migrate to another country for finding a job. 25000
people
show that they
move
for studying which a significant reaches just under 50000 in 2005.
This
is followed by the increase in the number of
people
that
move
for working and study before it reached approximately 90000 in 2015. Both moving for adventure and visiting family and friends are not the main reason why
people
need to
move
to the capital city.
This
is because when we grow up we need to
move
to somewhere else that our family will not be with us.
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