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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are good at or that they find the most interesting. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

#people #teenagers #school #subjects #focus
There is a fierce debate about whether
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teenagers should focus on all school
subjects
, or concentrate on those
courses
 they are good at or most interested in. I basically believe that
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young adults should pay more attention
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 the areas that they find their interests in
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 because I think that
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passion plays an important role in doing things well. Admittedly, it is important for students to
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 the balance among all
subjects
 in the school. In the education system nowadays, the public usually
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 that it is necessary to have a
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 development of academic performance. Take my home country, Taiwan,
for example
, students are able to get better resources to learn only if they get good grades
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 the tests and
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 in so-called world-famous schools.
However
, I still believe that it is acceptable for teenagers to concentrate on those
subjects
 that they find
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or good at.
To begin
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 others are good at other fields is common
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society, and in
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, everyone has their own responsibility.
Furthermore
, I think that it is of benefit for the young to find where their enthusiasm is as early as possible, which may make them feel less
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 when entering
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work place
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.
For instance
, one of my friends is
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 person who used to have
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learning traditional science and always enjoy
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literature
courses
, so she usually gave priority to literature-related
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. She understood that her passion was in literature, and did not have to waste time
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learning those
courses
 she was not interested in,
as a result
, she became a writer soon after
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graduation,
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people were still wondering what jobs they should do. In conclusion,
although
 all school
subjects
 are all important, it is likely for the
youngers
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 to lose themselves
while
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 the
courses
 that they have no interest in. I believe that teenagers should focus on what they are good at and gain confidence from those
subjects
.
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