You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: •explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months •say how your work could be done while you are away •ask for his/her help in arranging it Write at least 150 words.

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Good morning sir, I am writing

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essay to inform you that I want to job in the head station which is located in India, for at least 6 months. I want to try it there because of some reasons behind it. First of all, more experience and skills can be earned in the head service. I can get the opportunity to perform with senior employees who have a lot of knowledge about

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association. What skills or knowledge can be used to improve our company s productivity?

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, Basically, I am from India. In

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way, I am able to spend a good time with my friends and relatives.

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is a kind of vocation for me. During that time, I will complete my task online and our employee Kulwinder will

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help me to complete my task. I want to you that arrange a ticket for my flight to India. the group do not need to worry about my arrangement for my stay. Because my parents live in the same city where is place. So, I will live there with my parents. I hope you will allow me to job in the head office of the company. Yours sincerely, Veena Tani

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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206 words

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