The graph below shows the percentage of students at a UK university who watched TV sports, drama and news programmes over a one-year period. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentage of students at a UK university who watched TV

sports, drama and news programmes over a one-year period.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make

comparisons where relevant.
The given line graph
illustrate
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illustrates
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the
percentage
the percentages of
students
at a UK university who watched
TV
sports,
drama
, and
news
programs
throughout the
year
2008.
Overall
the graph shows that
sport
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sports
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tv
program is the most popular over the entire
year
compared to
drama
and
news
program
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programs
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. In January, around half of the
students
(50%) were watching sports
programs
, and
this
level remained constant until March. The
percentage
then
steadily increased, reaching its peak in June at around 80%. Later, the
percentage
of
students
decreased to 40% in September and
then
progressively increased until the end of the
year
. Contrastingly, in January, around three out of ten
students
(30%) were watching the
news
,
while
nearly two out of ten
students
(18%) were engrossed in watching
drama
TV
programs
. These proportions remained relatively stable until mid-April
,
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when the
percentage
of
students
following the
news
began to decline gradually. Simultaneously, the
percentage
of
students
watching
drama
TV
programs
started to rise, reaching a peak of 22% and maintaining that level until the
year
's end.
However
, the
percentage
of
students
watching the
news
saw a progressive increase again from August onwards, culminating at 20% by the end of the
year
.
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