The table below shows expenditures on advertising of four car companies in the UK in 2002.

The table below shows expenditures on advertising of four car companies in the UK in 2002.
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The table informs the spending on advertising for four vehicle manufacturers in the UK in 2002.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the media type of TV has the highest advertising
while
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Cinema became the least way to promote their products in 2002. Cetrizine has the highest advertising from using the TV with 70
million
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in expenses followed by
Vauxhall
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,
Renault
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, and Rover, with 65, 59, and 45 respectively. Both Rover and Cetrizine did not choose Cinema as their advertising media as they have 0 expenses.
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,
Renault
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and
Vauxhall
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only used 6 and 5
million
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respectively for their expense when using Cinema.
Vauxhall
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only used 8
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for advertising their car in Press and it became the smallest spending.
Renault
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becomes the most loyal for having a Press with a spending of 45
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. For outdoor marketing,
Renault
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and
Vauxhall
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have the highest expense
while
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Cetrizine and Rover have only 3 and 2 respectively.
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