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The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the amount of consumed energy by
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US citizens from 1980 and anticipated
consumption
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 to 2030.
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, over the 50-year
period
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 the
consumption
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 of petrol and oil and coal is going to experience
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steady growth.At the same time, nuclear
power
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 and solar and wind
power
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 show almost unchanged trends over the given period. In 1980 the US energy
consumption
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 by petrol and oil and coal was 35 and 16
quadrillion
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units
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 respectively. Petrol and coal trends increased considerably over the years and will reach the figure of approximately 47 and 30
quadrillion
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units
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 until 2030. In the
meantine
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meantime
, the amount of consumed natural gas was 20
quadrillion
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units
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,
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 showed a steady increase up to slightly under 25
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 in 2014 and
then
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 remain constant.
According to
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consumption
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 of nuclear, solar and wind and hydropower was approximately 4
quadrillion
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units
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 in 1980. From 1980 to 2000 nuclear
power
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 experienced a slight increase and will remain stable until 2025. The same trend will be experienced by solar and wind
power
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 with a slight decrease in
consumption
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 in 1995.
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, the amount of consumed hydropower went down from 1995 to 2000 and from 2005 to 2010 and
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 will show
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an unchanged
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 trend.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, power, quadrillion, units with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "unchanged" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy consumption
  • projections
  • renewable energy
  • non-renewable resources
  • sustainable
  • fossil fuels
  • nuclear energy
  • biofuels
  • hydroelectric power
  • solar energy
  • wind energy
  • trends
  • increases/decreases
  • shifts
  • milestones
  • significant
  • forecast
  • implications
  • sustainable development
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