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Band 6.5

Scientists predict that all people will choose to talk the same global language in the future. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, there are over 1000 languages which are spoken all around the globe, and
people
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 have a variety of choices if they want to learn a new
language
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 for their general knowledge. In
this
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 essay, I will argue the benefits and consequences of speaking only
one
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language
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.
To begin
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 with, speaking the same
language
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 as everybody around the globe might benefit a number of
people
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,
due to
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 the fact that
this
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 method will help folks to understand each other much better.
For example
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,when a person travels in a different
country
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 other than his and he or she needs help from other
people
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 with different nationality, most of the time they do not understand each other
due to
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 the lack of knowledge of the
language
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, even though English is
one
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 of the most spoken languages, numerous
people
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 have difficulties to learn it.
This
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 way, speaking a universal
language
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, where everybody can learn and understand it will help to reduce misunderstandings between
people
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 with different backgrounds.
On the other hand
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, only learning
one
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language
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 , might disadvantage the
people
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 who adore expanding their vocabulary by learning a new
language
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.
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, learning a new
language
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 helps you understand the culture and traditions of the
country
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 in which the
language
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 you are trying to learn, a plethora of
people
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 whose hobby is travelling, want to experience what it is like to travel somewhere where they can understand the stories the locals are telling them. In that case, learning various languages helps you improve your general knowledge about the nationalities from different corners of the world. In conclusion, both views of points have their advantages and disadvantages,
however
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,speaking the same
language
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 as everybody, might destroy a
country
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's culture,
due to
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 the fact that your
country
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's
language
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 plays a significant role in the
country
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's culture,
nevertheless
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, spoken
one
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language
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 helps the society to communicate much better.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global language
  • linguistic diversity
  • cultural heritage
  • language extinction
  • international communication
  • educational barriers
  • global homogenization
  • cultural identity
  • translation tools
  • linguistic resources
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