You have some time off work and are hoping to visit a close friend, Stephanie, for a few days. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • suggest spending time together • explain why you have time to do this • propose some activities

Dear Stephanie, I hope to see you

good in

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in good

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health. I am writing

this

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letter to let you know about the visit I am planning to pay to your place for a couple of days. As I haven't occupied the annual holidays so I will be

utilizing

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one week to come there. I have a few ideas for spending

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time

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joy. I am so excited about the release of an upcoming Hollywood movie.

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, I know

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apply

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you

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like to watch films,

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this

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is the best chance for us to go to a movie one day. For the rest of the days, we may go for a picnic in a mountainous region. We may cook food and sing songs during the duration. One day we should go shopping

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also

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. I am so excited to meet you by the end of

the coming

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week. I can't wait to see you. Take care of yourself. Yours Sincerely Sadia Khan

sadiakhan971

Jul 18, 2023

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structure

Plan with a clear start, middle, and end in short lines, and keep one idea per paragraph.

content

Choose one time frame (few days or a week) and stick to it to be easy to read.

grammar

Use simple, common words and fix common mistakes like 'good health' and 'holidays'.

tone

Warm tone that shows care.

content

Clear wish to visit and share plans.

ideas

Simple, honest ideas for activities.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

161 words

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