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This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.

This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, making comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart provides information about the proportion of recycling rates for selected materials from four different types in a particular country between 1982 and 2010. In general, there was an upward trend, except for the paper and cardboard type, and
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 the position between the four types remained similar in the given time period, with paper and cardboard at the top, followed by glass containers,
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 cans, and plastics at the bottom. There was a fluctuating trend in the paper and cardboard material; from 1982 until 1986, it increased and
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 fell down in 1990, which returned to the beginning of the time period at around 62
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, before rising remarkably in 1994 to 80
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 and again decreasing considerably until 2010 at 70
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, the glass containers type declined gradually between 1982 and 1990 by 10
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 and
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 climbed steeply to 50
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at the end
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 of the time period.
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,
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 cans type started in 1986 at below 10
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 and
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 peaked dramatically by 40
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 to reach almost 50
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 in 2010.
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 material began being counted in 1990 as a percentage of the recycling rate, and the proportion remained stable until 2010, at below 10
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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