The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps illustrate the future development of the Norbition residents' area.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that Norbiton's enhancement will be more residential and amenity compared to now. The most noteworthy alteration is to eliminate a group of factories and instil plenty of housing in Linking Words
this
area. Linking Words
Furthermore
, a medical centre, shops, and even a playground will be constructed.
At the present time, farmland locates in front of the river which is long and both of them are on the north side of the town, and there are many factories that will extinct soon in the middle of Norbiton. Linking Words
However
, in the future, it is obvious that the farmland will be evacuation to the northeast and the river will be separated and housing will be constructed in several areas, Linking Words
for example
, at the back side of a playground which is newly built and one is next to a medical centre.
Following that, the school will be installed precisely in the east, and new shops will be assembled in the middle side. Linking Words
Lastly
, in terms of housing, a few of them will be added below the river.Linking Words
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