While some believe that the best way to learn about current events is through newspapers, others think that they can learn news better through other forms of media. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Some believe that newspapers are the best sources to be informed about recent news,

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others consider that there are different kinds of

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to access up-to-date information.

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prints are used by seniors to learn about the latest events

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their reliability and accessibility, I believe that forms of

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as Facebook, Instagram, and Twitter are more effective sources to gain knowledge about present data. On the one hand, prints are considered the best method to be certain of reports by some.

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, journals and gazettes are common among the old generation to be aware of news immediately because of the authenticity of any information. Individuals may buy these which provide valid reports officially published in the press to learn about trends depending on their interests by paying a certain amount of money.

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, in Azerbaijan, nearly every member of the old generation gets data about the latest incidents from gazettes.

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, I think that they can access these materials on official websites without paying for them.

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, diverse forms of

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provide the community with the latest trends and are the best source for certain people.

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is to say that Twitter, Facebook, and Instagram are mostly used to obtain information about recent events by human beings because they share current happenings all over the world

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and without charging money.

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, when rigorous earthquakes happened in Turkey, it was shared on the Internet immediately, and every country helped the Turkish people to address that issue.

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, I believe that social

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shares up-to-date events

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and freely. In conclusion, despite journals and gazettes providing reliable reports to inform people about current occasions, I believe that other types of social

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namely Twitter, Instagram, and Facebook are the best way to gain knowledge about recent news because of their speed and worldwide reputation.

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The essay addresses the prompt by discussing both views and providing the writer's opinion. However, the ideas could be more fully developed and the response could be more comprehensive.

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The essay demonstrates a logical structure and presents clear introduction and conclusion. The main points are supported with relevant examples.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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in-depth analysis
credibility
editorial standards
fact-checking procedures
reliable source
real-time updates
unfolding events
multimedia content
news websites
social media
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comprehensive understanding
traditional newspapers
digital platforms
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