The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
Introduction:
This
report is aimed to discuss and compare the data that can be obtained from the graph. The graph itself gives us an idea about the 3 different types of communication
and the amount of people communicationg through them to the Tourist information Office.
Data:
I can be seen that the amount op people who were using the in person communiocation has significantly increased through the time. Wheres it started from the least position of users
rounding to the 420 in the Janiary it has exponentially increased up to 1900 users
per months in June.
The telephone communication
has also
expanded by flactuating from 900 users
in the January and could be seen in the position of the 1600 communicating pople to the office in June
Letter/email was on the second place at the start of the recording, however
with time it is results have significantly decreased. By starting with 790 users
in January the amount of users
had progressively decreasing with each month rounding up to 290 users
in June.
Conclusion:
The in person communication
had showes greatest progress in people communication
through it and letter/email could be stated that was the least demending way of communicating. The telephone way of communicating met the demand and supply and had linear expansionSubmitted by ilandykto on
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