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In some countries, the use of renewable energy sources is being encouraged. Is it a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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These days, a
lot
 of countries are investing in renewable
energy
.
Although
 there are still a few countries that oppose the usage of renewable
energy
 sources, I believe that governments should encourage and develop different ways to use renewable
energy
.
This
 essay will explain why
this
 development is a positive one. Renewable
energy
 sources can save the environment in terms of pollution. These days, a
lot
 of automobile companies are manufacturing electric cars which don't release toxic fumes and
also
 drastically reduced the need to extract petrol or diesel by digging oil wells,
otherwise
,
this
 would have resulted in a
lot
 of noise and air pollution. Recent statistics published by the Roads and Traffic Department show that air and noise pollution has drastically reduced with the usage of electric cars.
Moreover
, the government has arranged charging stations in a few cities which are powered by solar
energy
. Clearly, the usage of renewable
resources
 should be encouraged.
In addition
 to that, using renewable
energy
resources
 can be financially beneficial as well. These days more and more people are showing interest in solar
energy
 and there are a
lot
 of firms providing solar panel installation services. People can save a
lot
 of money by installing solar panels on rooftops and using the electricity generated by them. A recent article published by the State Electricity Department says that households can reduce their electricity bill by fifteen per cent by using the power generated by the solar panels installed on their rooftops. In conclusion, there are a
lot
 of advantages in using
energy
 produced by renewable
resources
 and
this
 essay just discussed a few of them.I believe that renewable
resources
 are the future and should be encouraged by governments.
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