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The table below show daily oil production in four countries from 2000 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below show daily oil production in four countries from 2000 to 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the daily
oil
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production
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 in four different nations over a four-
year
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period
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, starting from 2000.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 there is an upward trend among countries during the
period
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 with the exception of
Congo
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. It is notable that Chad recorded a significant increase in the examined
period
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. In the first
year
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, Nigeria was leading the daily
oil
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production
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 with 2 million
tons
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, followed by the figure for
Congo
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, at 270,000
tons
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. After 2 years, a slight decrease was witnessed in both Nigeria and
Congo
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, of 100,000
tons
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 and 40,000
tons
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, respectively.
At the end
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 of the
period
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, the daily
oil
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production
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 in Nigeria recorded a gradual increase to 2.3 million
tons
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,
while
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 in
Congo
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 the number of daily
oil
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 still continuously dropped and ended at 0.2 million
tons
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. During the first
year
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, Chad did not produce the
oil
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,
whereas
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 the daily
oil
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 quantity in Somalia was reported a small number, at 8,000
tons
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.
However
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, in the
last
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year
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, significant growth was experienced in Chad, increasing 50,000 times in comparison to the
production
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 quantity in the beginning
year
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. In Somalia,
the
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daily
oil
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production
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 had an eight-fold increase in 2004.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words oil, production, period, congo, year, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Production levels
  • Trends
  • Increase/decrease
  • Fluctuation
  • Stable
  • Peak production
  • Output
  • Significant changes
  • Yearly comparison
  • Global production
  • Correlations
  • Patterns
  • Volume of production
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