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Some people say that Ebooks and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In today’s technological era, where more a more people are adopting
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a paperless environment, traditional hard paper books, newspapers and
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 are now rapidly becoming part of
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history. I strongly believe, that with the passage of time, E-paper will eventually replace the traditional hard paper, sooner or later.
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, with increasing access to
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 to the wide spectrum of the population,
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 traditional method will eventually fade away. With the advent of
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, masses are tuned to ease of access,
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 to that, the time constraint is compelling them to do
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 on the go with simultaneously doing many tasks in parallel. Nowadays,
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 of the best ways to keep yourself updated is to read an e-magazine/e-newspaper/e-book
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. Executives, students and teachers now do not need to carry heavy bags of books or reading material. Thousands of reading stuff
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 now available with
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 click away. As a matter of fact,
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 advancement in
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 almost vanished the hard paper
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 and newspapers, recently
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 of the most popular
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 “National Geographic” has published
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last
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 issue and is now only available as an online copy.
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, in today’s economic challenges, publishing hard copies
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 no longer economically viable, since it requires too many resources like machinery, workforce and physical space.
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,
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, e-publishing requires optimal resources that too does not necessarily in
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 physical location.
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, many newspapers and
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 have content writers working remotely for them, not only
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, graphic designers and other staff members are
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 working remotely to design and publish the newspaper. Moving forward, with
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further
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technology
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, a time is not far away, when
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 books and
magazines
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 will only be the talk of the town. In conclusion,
technology
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 has already changed the reading methodology,
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, in the modern days, reading will be completely revamped and will be based solely on e-solutions.
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 technological advancement will allow ease of access
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 every passing day it will reach
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more depth of the population.
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, going forward I believe, readers will have so much influx of e-content, which they can explore at ease
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 their fingertips.
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