The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use

The diagram below shows how solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use
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The diagram gives information about how to produce domestic
electricity
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by using solar
energy
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. There are five distinct stages to generate
electricity
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by clean
energy
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such
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as sunlight.
This
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process begins with capturing sun rays
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solar panels.
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, the
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final steps are about how to keep the extra domestic
electricity
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out of the house. First of all, solar panels on the roof of a normal house take
energy
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from the sun and
then
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transport
this
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energy
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into DC.
Next,
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the current is passed to the inverter, which turns it into AC and regulates the supply of
electricity
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.
This
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supply goes directly to the electrical panel where the current is distributed throughout the whole house. In the fourth step shown on the diagram, a utility meter in the home is responsible for conducting the excessive solar
electricity
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power outside the home through the grid.
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, if
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solar power does not provide enough supply, the
electricity
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will flow back by the utility grid into the household through the meter.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, energy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Direct Current (DC)
  • Alternating Current (AC)
  • Inverter
  • Electric panel
  • Utility meter
  • Electric grid
  • Energy storage
  • Renewable energy
  • Sustainable
  • Excess electricity
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