The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011

The table below shows changes in the numbers of residents cycling to work in different areas of the UK between 2001 and 2011
The table compares the
numbers
of people who cycled to work in twelve
areas
in the UK
from
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2001 and 2011.
It is clear that
the proportion of Britain citizens, who commuted to their workplace by bicycle, increased significantly in various
areas
in the United Kingdom over the 10-year period. Inner
London
had by far the highest
numbers
of cyclists in both years. In 2001, around 43 thousand residents in Inner
London
commuted to their work by cycle, and the figure rose to more than 106 thousand in 2011, an increase of 144%.
By contrast
, Outer
London
took second place
as
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the biggest
numbers
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of cyclists in the UK, with about 45%,
was
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the lowest of the twelve
areas
shown in the table.
However
, Brighton and Hove were the second highest percentage change increase (109%), after Inner
London
, in the
numbers
of
the
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residents cycling to work, but Bristol was the UK’s second city in terms of total
numbers
of cycling commuters, with 8,108 in 2001 and 15,786 in 2011. Figures for the other eight
areas
were below
10
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thousand mark in both years.
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