In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cell phone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does the development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

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Nowadays all over the world,
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use mobile phone apps become more and more common. It is development or added pros and cons. In
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essay, I will discuss both pros and cons of the same.
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, when commenting on the website
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very
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much pleased with the online,but they consider
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risk
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then
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.
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people
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were not able to believe put trust
therfor
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therefore
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,they
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preferred
cash
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on delivery. As an example, some
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buying pizza in a pizza shop request after delivery the paying
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.
people
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were comfortable with
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.
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, someone orders from the supermarket their food but like to fee for
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after the delivery.Because they are comfortable they delivered on time.
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, some
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time passed
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were comfortable with
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online
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which means that the payment
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made using
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they
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movable phone apps. One
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popular application nowadays is
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for
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you have to make your own account
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apply
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and start some amount for the bank account.As an example,
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buy some dresses online by shopping through mobile phone apps. They can order pee for and through their bank accounts. And
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they give special offers for online fees. As an example, If someone orders an online for more than a hundred dollars they give a discount on Twente present.
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like
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opportunity.
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generally don't see
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as a disadvantage. They use some application bank details and are looking for some details of the user. So we can say that more
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are agreed and comfortable fee for the
cash
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • speed
  • eliminate
  • biometric verification
  • encryption
  • cashless society
  • environmentally friendly
  • impulsive buying
  • overspending
  • dependency
  • battery drain
  • technical issues
  • digital divide
  • access
  • smart technology
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