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You have just spent a weekend at a friend's house.when you returned home. You discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house. Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat. Tell him what the coat looks like , where you think you left it and what was inside it. Make some suggestions about how to get it back.

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Dear Aman, I hope you are doing well! We had a great time together at your home. I have reached home safely and I am feeling nostalgic.
However
, when I reached home, I remembered I left my
jacket
 at your apartment. I left in a hurry because I was getting late and forgot to take my
jacket
. Many important belongings are in the coat' pocket. It is black in colour, Michael Kores brand coat with an attached hat. There is a white fur on the zipper. I left
in
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 the main hall on the wooden chair. The problem is that many of my important ID proofs and other things are in that coat's pocket. Without those cards, I can't even buy groceries and take the bus because the cards are in that
jacket
' pocket. Here is a plan, my colleague is coming to your city for a business meeting. Please hand over my
jacket
 to him. His name is Suraj. I already gave him your contact number and he will call you. We will meet soon. Love and kisses! Best Regards, Gurbir
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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