the chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in New Port city center from 2003-2012.

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The line graph illustrates the data regarding the Newport city centre where the alternation took place in three various types of cases burglary, car theft and robbery in the period of ten years.

Overall

, it can be clearly seen that the burglaries were high

whereas

the robberies were very less in the year 2003 compared to the other crimes in the city.

Accordingly

, the incidents of burglaries

initially

started at the range of approximately three thousand five hundred and there was an up and down till 2006,

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these were reduced to fifteen hundred over the period of six ages.

Moreover

, there was a fluctuation in vehicle theft in the span of ten ages.

Additionally

, robberies from the people were around five hundred cases which increased slightly up to 50 no. more over

this

time. There was an intersection of no. of incidents that occurred in the year 2007 between the thefts in households and cars

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