In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything of they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this massage?
Nowadays, the ways of living are different in various countries, it is a dept that culture has changed in
this
location. One
of these affections of culture,
is told that children and Remove the comma
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people
who work
hard and try too much would be successful as as they did. These words might play negative or significant positive roles in children's life,
since I will argue about Remove the comma
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this
topic whether this
plan is good or not and explain my opinion on it.
On the one
hand, in my ,opinion when people
live in one
location, the culture of this
place set the type of their living that was the best way for people
who live from old day to now,hence
these people
do these rules and they pleased. For instance
, in my home ,town young people
live by trying hard and everyone believes that it works. They try for everything in their life and give their effort.
On the other hand
, I think if people
do it extremely, it might bring disadvantages. For example
, if one
child is for something or he does not have, try more than that he or she can, may can not get his her or goal. In another word
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other words
this
work
can not always bring happiness since if you do not successful after a lot of effort, you think that it can not work
and you feel depressed.
To sum up
, ,
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generally
we can not trust every pattern that Add a comma
,generally
people
in the past created hance at the end
of our work
, it might be finished badly or winly. On the whole, in our ,choices if we focus on our ability and work
on it, it always is a win.Submitted by y.maryam.2004 on
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