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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything of they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this massage?

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Nowadays, the ways of living are different in various countries, it is a dept that culture has changed in
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 of these affections of culture
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 is told that children and
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 who
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 hard and try too much would be successful as as they did. These words might play negative or significant positive roles in children's life
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 since I will argue about
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 topic whether
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 plan is good or not and explain my opinion on it. On the
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 hand, in my ,opinion when
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 location, the culture of
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 place set the type of their living that was the best way for
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 who live from old day to now,
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 these
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 do these rules and they pleased.
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, in my home ,town young
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 live by trying hard and everyone believes that it works. They try for everything in their life and give their effort.
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, I think if
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 do it extremely, it might bring disadvantages.
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, if
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 child is for something or he does not have, try more than that he or she can, may can not get his her or goal. In
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,
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 can not always bring happiness since if you do not successful after a lot of effort, you think that it can not
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 and you feel depressed.
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 we can not trust every pattern that
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 in the past created hance
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 of our
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, it might be finished badly or winly. On the whole, in our ,choices if we focus on our ability and
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 on it, it always is a win.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Encouragement
  • Motivation
  • Determination
  • Work Ethic
  • Persistence
  • Self-esteem
  • Confidence
  • Challenges
  • Unrealistic Expectations
  • Disappointment
  • Frustration
  • Limitations
  • External Factors
  • Pressure
  • Stress
  • Anxiety
  • Mental Health
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