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The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates different kinds of
animals
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 being used in
research
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 experiments in the U.S. There are 6 lists of
animals
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 used for testing a product and units are being measured by percentage.
Overall
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,
rabbits
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 are the most common
animals
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 used for
research
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 experiments
while
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 sheep are the
last
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 type of animal used for testing
research
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. The biggest percentage of
animals
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 shown in the chart is
rabbits
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. There are 38.7 % of
rabbits
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 are being used for animal testing in the U.S. After
rabbits
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, hamsters
also
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 being used for
research
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. As we can see from the chart there is 27.7% of animal testing is using hamsters. Dogs are in the third position where there is 10.2% of
research
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 tested on dogs. The three latest
animals
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 in the diagram for animal testing in the U.S. are pigs (9.3%), primates (9%) and sheep.
Although
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 there is no exact information on the number of sheep,
this
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 animal is still used for testing a product but not as many as
rabbits
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 and hamsters.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words animals, research, rabbits with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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