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The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie chart illustrates the presentation of animals being used for tests, including
rabbits
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, hamsters, dogs, pigs, primates and sheep, in the United States. From the overview,
it is clear that
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rabbits
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 were the most used living creatures, which occupied the largest proportion
in
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of
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 data (38.7%). Hamsters are the second high, with only 10% lower than
rabbits
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. As for dogs, pigs and primates, they have similar percentages, with around 10% in each species. Sheep, the least used animal to test, only stood for below 5%, which was almost a tenth of
rabbits
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.
To conclude
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,
rabbits
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 are the most popular animals for testing. Dogs, pigs and primates share a similar proportion, and sheep are regarded as the
last
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 choice.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words rabbits with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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