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The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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, the pie chart illustrates information about six different species that have been used for animal testing in the United States. The largest segment in animal testing was contributed by rabbits and hamsters, at 38.7% largest in demographic and 27.7% for hamsters slightly lower than rabbits, and comes at second highest in the chart, respectively.
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, 9.3% of pigs and 9% of primates have been tested for animal testing. In comparison dogs testing was a little high in percentage at 10.2%, which combined these three segments turned out to be near as testing of hamsters appositely. Remained 4 to 6% of animal testing was done on
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