The line graph below compares the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) in four countries in billions of US dollar.

The line graph below compares the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) in four countries in billions of US dollar.
The given line graph illustrates compared Bangladesh,
Pakistan
, Nepal and
Malaysia
the Gross Domestic
Product
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Products
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in
billion
of US
dollar
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dollars
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between 2010 and 2015.
Overall
, it can be seen that 4 countries
shows
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a sharp rise but
Malaysia
last
its growth in 2014,
while
Nepal remained almost unchanged in 5 years.
Firstly
, in 2010,
Malaysia
reported
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Domestic Product production of approximately $270
billion
, the highest among these 4 countries. We can see that
Pakistan
is rising with 180
billion
dollars
this
year.
Pakistan
is getting more than 70
billion
dollars
from Bangladesh. Nepal is at the lost place with $10
billion
.
Malaysia
's (GDP) will show a peak of 330
billion
dollars
in 2014
,
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but will drop to 30
billion
dollars
by 2015.
Pakistan
will grow steadily and reach 280
billion
dollars
by the end of the year. Bangladesh brings its (GDP) to 200
billion
dollars
. Nepal will not exceed 10
billion
dollars
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pakistan, malaysia, billion, dollars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Gross Domestic Product
  • economic performance
  • growth rate
  • stagnation
  • trend analysis
  • fluctuations
  • economic boom
  • recession
  • industrial sectors
  • projection
  • fiscal policy
  • economic indicator
  • per capita income
  • purchasing power parity
  • upward trend
  • downturn
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