Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain the main causes and effects of this problem, and suggest some possible solutions.
As, childhood obesity is becoming a serious
problem
in many countries so, to control this
problem
government
needs to take a possible solution for this
. Suggest are described is blown.
Firstly
, as
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apply
nowdays
, a Correct the word
nowadays
childs
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child
child's
are have
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are had
kownledge
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knowledge
compare
to older days. Wrong verb form
compared
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, there are a
kids who Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
obeing
to Correct your spelling
belong
there
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their
generation
. People should teache
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teach
a children
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children
a child
respent
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respect
a teachers
. Correct the article-noun agreement
teachers
a teacher
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should give Fix the agreement mistake
Schools
knowleghe
to Correct your spelling
knowledge
there
a student about helping each other Correct your spelling
their
as well as
teaching others. Insitution
should have one Correct your spelling
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a
week about the value Correct article usage
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moral
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morals
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should help those student
who are good at moral Change the determiner
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those students
value
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values
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the young
generation
are
more involved in social Change the verb form
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media
governmnet
should Correct your spelling
government
spared
awareness through social Change the verb form
spare
be spared
media
. If young
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the young
generation
will help old
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the old
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about facilities Correct your spelling
knowledge
then
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good for the Correct your spelling
it's
nation
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nation's
developmnet
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development
as well as
growth.
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, there are
so many Change the verb form
is
reason
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reasons
by
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for
which
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this
problem
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involved
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involvement
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their
activity
. Fix the agreement mistake
activities
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, a
kids are Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
respecting
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respectful
compare
to Correct quantifier usage
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past
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the past
due to
social media
. Thirdly
, by giving knowledge about importance
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the importance
fora
education. The reason behind Correct your spelling
for
spoity
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spotty
there
health is social Replace the word
their
media
. Government
should premote
value-able videos. As the young Correct your spelling
promote
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is more involved in the
indoor activity Correct article usage
apply
government
should make some outdoor activity
more and more.
In conclusion, By focusing on the above data Fix the agreement mistake
activities
problem
can be reduced. By taking some suggested solution from above information this
problem
can be reduced. Thus
, by promoting moral value problem
can be less.Submitted by purvametaliya99 on
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Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
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- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
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