The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
The line graph presents the typical monthly deferents in the prices of three metals during 2014.
overall
, Nickel has significantly decreased from 6% to the lowest point -3% as we can see there was a fluctuation in the data for the zink,
on the other hand
, copper has dropped from 2% to above-1% . The nickel dramatically decline and get stable for almost 2
months
until May it had sharply decreased changes in the price to its lowest point -3%,
however
in zinc, there was a rise from 1% to 3% and it has gradually fallen to the peak-1% and it has been stable for almost 3
months
and there was steely growth, the data between zinc and nickel have a
semeliry
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cemetery
seminary
in increased and the decrease. in the copper, there was a gradually drooped for almost 5
months
from 2% to approximately -1% until it gets stable as the others for three
months
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words months with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly change
  • prices of metals
  • trend
  • spike
  • fluctuation
  • increase
  • decrease
  • sharp rise
  • sharp fall
  • stability
  • volatility
  • data points
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • external factors
  • influences
  • market dynamics
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