The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

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The line graph presents the typical monthly deferents in the prices of three metals during 2014.

overall

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, Nickel has significantly decreased from 6% to the lowest point -3% as we can see there was a fluctuation in the data for the zink,

on the other hand

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, copper has dropped from 2% to above-1% . The nickel dramatically decline and get stable for almost 2

months

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until May it had sharply decreased changes in the price to its lowest point -3%,

however

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in zinc, there was a rise from 1% to 3% and it has gradually fallen to the peak-1% and it has been stable for almost 3

months

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and there was steely growth, the data between zinc and nickel have a

semeliry

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cemetery

seminary

in increased and the decrease. in the copper, there was a gradually drooped for almost 5

months

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from 2% to approximately -1% until it gets stable as the others for three

months

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Vocabulary: Replace the words months with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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5 paragraphs

154 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

average monthly change
prices of metals
trend
spike
fluctuation
increase
decrease
sharp rise
sharp fall
stability
volatility
data points
comparison
contrast
external factors
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The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

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