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The flowchart below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans.

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The provided flow chart illustrates the process of how
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cans
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 are recycled. First of all,
aluminium
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cans
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 must be collected in special containers for reusable products. And these containers are brought to recycling factories, where the process of waste recovery begins.
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, all amassed
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 are cleaned and sorted out in order to get rid of waste.
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, the sorted products go through specialized machines which shred them into tiny pieces.
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 the next step, the pieces are compressed to form a metal block.
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 the blocks are put into giant ovens that heat them under particular degrees for melting. After being softened, the
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 is passed between two big rollers that flatten it from 2.5 mm to 6 mm thick,
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, flattened metal is delivered to special factories that produce drinking products, where
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 are filled and distributed to shops and local markets for consumers. Nowadays, the percentage of reused
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cans
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 contain 74% of all, in the United Kingdom.
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