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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
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The line graph displays how much carbon dioxide
emissions
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 were produced by
people
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 in four different countries over a 40-years period.
Overall
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,
while
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 two of these countries, Italy and Portugal, showed an upward trend, others experienced a decline over time.
In addition
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,
people
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 in the UK and Portugal were the highest and lowest emitters, respectively. With regard to the downward trend, British
people
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 were responsible for approximately 11 metric
tons
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 of
emissions
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 in 1967 and
this
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 number fell gradually to almost 9 metric
tons
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 by 2007.
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, in Sweden, it started with almost 8 metric
tons
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 of carbon
emissions
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 at the beginning and
then
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 peaked at roughly 11 metric
tons
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 in 1977.
This
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 trend went down marginally to 6 metric
tons
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at the end
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 of the period. In terms of increase, both Italian and Portuguese
people
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 were starting to increase the amount of CO2
emissions
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. In Italy,
emissions
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 of carbon dioxide were nearly 4 metric
tons
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 at the beginning and it rose to 8 metric
tons
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 by 2007. Meanwhile, in Portugal,
emissions
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 were under 2 metric
tons
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 in 1967 and it reached 6 metric
tons
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 by 2007, similar to Sweden.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words emissions, people, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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