A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to care for your pet describe other household duties

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Dear John, Thank you so much for the acceptance with regard to taking care of my house and my pet

while

I am going on vacation. As you know I am travelling to Sydney for a week to visit my sister and her family, but I will always be available on my mobile and you can contact me at 123-234-1234 if you have to ask me about anything. I will not be able to accompany my dog (Johnny) so he will be at home and I would request you to feed him twice a day with the pet food that I kept on the dining table.

In addition

, you can

also

take him for a walk once a day in the evening as he enjoys the outdoor visit.

In addition

, please water the flowers once a day and turn off all the lights at night. I will be back on the 27th of December 2023. Once again, I would appreciate it for taking care of my home during my travel and I will do the same when you plan your vacation. Thank you so much. see you soon and take care. Yours lovely, Jee

Submitted by jeeanay on Sat Dec 09 2023

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

194 words

8.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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