A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to care for your pet describe other household duties
Dear John,
Thank you so much for the acceptance with regard to taking care of my house and my pet
while
I am going on vacation.
As you know I am travelling to Sydney for a week to visit my sister and her family, but I will always be available on my mobile and you can contact me at 123-234-1234 if you have to ask me about anything.
I will not be able to accompany my dog (Johnny) so he will be at home and I would request you to feed him twice a day with the pet food that I kept on the dining table. In addition
, you can also
take him for a walk once a day in the evening as he enjoys the outdoor visit.
In addition
, please water the flowers once a day and turn off all the lights at night. I will be back on the 27th of December 2023. Once again, I would appreciate it for taking care of my home during my travel and I will do the same when you plan your vacation. Thank you so much.
see you soon and take care.
Yours lovely,
JeeSubmitted by jeeanay on
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- also
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- for instance
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- however
- although
- even though
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