Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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which involve teams like soccer are beneficial Use synonyms
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others argue that it is rather better to participate in individual contests like tennis ball. I blew that both are significantly important as playing as Linking Words
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brings about competitiveness and independence.
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, taking part in Linking Words
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such
as football and basketball makes the participant cooperate with other group members. Playing Linking Words
sports
like these makes use of different participants with different skills and talents, they all need to come together as a group with a particular aim, and together, they ensure that the goal is met. Use synonyms
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another to play the game, without cooperation, they will all be at a loss because all hands must be on deck. Having Use synonyms
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skill and it will be helpful when applying for work. Linking Words
For instance
, in playing football, there is a division of labour, we have the goalkeeper, strikers, midfielders and others who work together as a Linking Words
team
to win the match. Use synonyms
Similarly
in the health sector, there is a doctor, a nurse, an orderly, a sonographer and other professionals who work together for the betterment of the patients. I think Linking Words
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is the same for many businesses.
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On the other hand
, participating in competitions that involve only Linking Words
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player like chess or swimming makes people independent and competitive. In Use synonyms
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the decision will have to surpass your opponent’s. Linking Words
For example
, when athletes are running against other runners, they strive so hard to beat them. It is equally important to engage in individual Linking Words
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self-reliant and tough.
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person as they bring benefits like cooperativeness, teamwork, competitiveness and self-sustainability.Use synonyms
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