The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.
The maps illustrate the changes that took place in a rural
area
called Stokeford in the span of eighty years.
Overall
, it can be seen clearly that over this
period of time, a small village transformed into a developed area
whereas
the whole farmland is replaced by the household area
.
Accordingly
, in 1930, most of the land is used for agricultural purposes which contains a large building along with
a garden. The area
between the two roads had a post office and some shops along with
the fields. Additionally
, there was a primary school in front of the stores.
In the developed map, we can observe that, there were quite a lot of changes occurred which had improved the layout of the internal road where more no. of buildings constructed which had access for vehicles. The house is replaced by an old age home. The key houses, bridge, post office and the river stoke road remained the same.Submitted by kavilvk1 on
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