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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own Experience and knowledge

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Currently,
businesses
 are advertising their goods in
such
 a way that
there
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their
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products
 are unique.
This
 helps the
businesses
 in
there
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their
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 high sales, and as the technology has revolutionised it has become very easier to display the
products
 in different ways.  The competition in
businesses
 is highly increased nowadays,
therefore
 the
businesses
 are spending
theri
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their
 huge revenue in advertising their
products
 in different methods, but
i
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 think it is a negative development to some extent
,
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 because the original
product
 is not the same as compared to the
products
 they have advertised mostly. It is like a scam or a fraud. Tempting adverts in various ways urges people to buy their wares.
Moreover
, companies spend a huge amount of their budget by sponsoring their
products
 to influencers,
actors
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and actors
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, because
by
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their influence on people results in a chunk amount of sales. Most of the companies in
asia
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Asia
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 that are selling their
products
 online mostly
the
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clothing stores or electronic stores
presents
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 their
products
 in a unique way but the
orginal
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original
product
 is totally the opposite of their specific
product
. In conclusion, most
of
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the
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businesses
 do
this
 because they wanted to compete with their competitors in
sales
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the sales
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 of their wares. Everyone
have
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has
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 a right to advertise their goods but just show the
product
 in its original form.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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