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Fossil fuels are the main source of energy around the world today. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is replacing fossil fuels. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Fossil
fuels
 are used for transportation and other energy requirements.
Waste
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The waste
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 product of fossil
fuels
cause
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causes
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 many ecological problems related to
carbon
dioxide
 emissions that we are not able to neglect. It leads people to find
alternative
sources
 for maintaining energy supplies as fossil
fuels
 which are not rechargeable.
Carbon
dioxide
 plays
critical
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a critical
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 role
for
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in
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 maintaining the balance
Earth’s
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of Earth’s
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 atmosphere and
air
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the air
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 we breathe. We create CO2 every time when we drive a car,
use
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 electricity in our daily life. It is obviously seen that it became
reason
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the reason
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of
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 many environmental hazards
such
 as water pollution,
air
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and air
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 pollution.
For example
, metropolises and cities like New York, Seoul,
Los
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and Los
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 Angeles
suffers
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 from smoke fog which is caused by extracts of
carbon
dioxide
.
Furthermore
, there are
also
 some difficulties related to
depletion
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the depletion
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 of natural gases and oil as we utilize
the
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fossil fuel in
the
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 vast amount. It is evident, that fossil
fuels
 are not rechargeable
as well as
 nowadays human beings expend too much
oil
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much oil
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 and petrol rather than
last
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in last
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 decades which put
preserves
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the preserves
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 of natural
sources
 under threat. After a lot of thought, I am convinced that consuming
alternative
sources
such
 as wind power,
solar
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and solar
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 power can be truly beneficial
as well as
 there are several points to consider first of which is
protection
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the protection
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 of our environment and preventing any kind of
pollutions
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pollution
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 caused by
carbon
dioxide
;
second
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the second
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 point is preserving the natural resources.
Besides
to
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this
, the main reason is
renewability
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the renewability
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 of
alternative
sources
 in comparison to fossil
fuels
.
For instance
, we can see many countries
such
 as Iceland and Norway as
a
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 best evidence for supporting my proposition. In conclusion, I would like to state that replacing fossil
fuels
into
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alternative
sources
have
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has
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 positive impacts
for
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on
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well-being
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the well-being
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 of nature and human being life
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