The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below shows the results of a survey giving the reasons why people moved to the capital city of a particular country.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the results of a survey about the reasons why people migrate to urban areas or abroad between the
years
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2000 to 2015.
Overall
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, at the beginning reason behind migration is mainly
due to
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employment, but over the
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studies
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played a significant role in it. At the beginning of the year 2000, employment was the main reason for moving to other places in the country or outside the country with around 60000. Over the span of 10
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, there was a notable rise in the number with around 91000.
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, it decreased in succeeding 5
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to 88000. By observing more clearly in the year 2000, moving out for studies was relatively less when compared to employment with approximately 25000. In the time span of 15
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, there was a drastic growth in the number of people moving out for studies until 88000. Looking into the Adventure category it raised steadily from 10000 to 15000 over the 15
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. meanwhile, the family section started around 10000 and with a gradual rise until 22000.
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