You have been invited to attend an interview for a place on a course of study at a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot go to the interview at the time they wish. Write a letter to the admissions tutor. In your letter explain why you cannot keep the appointment apologise and offer to arrange a new appointment ask how long the interview will be, and whether there will be any tests during it You should write at least 150 words.

Dear Doc. Write, I am so grateful to receive your invitation for the
interview
next week about your course . Unfortunately, I have to write to apologise
firstly
, I might not be able to attend it on
time
due to
the
time
conflict. As you know, I have submitted a couple of applications for my study next year. Yesterday, I received another
interview
from the other course.,but the
time
management conflicted with your
interview
.
time
.
Due to
the location of the
interview
is far away from your building. I might not be able to attend yours at the scheduled
time
. So could I arrange a new one,please? I'm wondering how long it will take for your
interview
. I'm sincerely hoping to arrange
this
interview
for another
time
because I really love your course.
In addition
, is there any test during the
interview
I need to prepare? Because I did not find related information in your email. I would be very grateful if you can give me any instructions. Thank you for your attention, I do hope you will be able to send me a favourable reply and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Tina.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
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  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • regrettably
  • previous engagement
  • commitment
  • unavoidable
  • sincere apology
  • reschedule
  • accommodate
  • flexibility
  • adequate preparation
  • assessment
  • inconvenience
  • availability
  • alternative appointment
  • invitation
  • admissions tutor
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