the map a below shows the ground floor of a particular art gallery in 2005. plan b shows the same area in the present day. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps illustrate the differences in planning
gallery
in the year 2005 and its current form.
Overall
, it is clear that
the plan replaced exhibition
room 4 with an interactive kid's area
, temporary exhibitions were added, while
exhibition
rooms 1,2 and 3 remain in the same place and have no changes.
Currently, the art gallery
comprises three different exhibition
rooms and one for temporary designs , a spacious entrance hall with a reception desk that was placed in the centre of the ground floor, a gallery
shop, vending machines and an area
for children.
In 2005 there was a cafe and a shop that has been replaced by a gallery
shop. At the same time, the gallery
office was demolished and three vending machines were added in the northwest of the ground floor. Stairs to the upper floor are more
narrow compared with 2005 and next to them one lift was added. Near the Correct quantifier usage
apply
entrance
there can be noted that a ramp to wheelchairs appeared. Add a comma
,entrance
According to
the map, the fourth exhibition
room was converted into an interactive area
for children. In addition
, the area
with contemporary exhibitions was added on the west of the entrance hall.Submitted by katya.8932.45 on
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