The table shows the proportion of puplis attending four secondary school types between 2000 and 2009 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The table illustrates the four secondary
schools
in which students attend in proportion between 2000 and 2009.
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Overall
, it can be seen that the Voluntary-controlled Linking Words
schools
were at Use synonyms
peak
at the beginning of the period. Correct pronoun usage
their peak
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Grammar
academy Correct article usage
the Grammar
also
had 24 per cent of pupils in the beginning. In the Linking Words
end
, Community Use synonyms
schools
had a higher proportion of candidates.
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To begin
with, Specialist Linking Words
schools
had a fall trend during the period. Use synonyms
However
, it had 12% of candidates Linking Words
at the
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end
it had only 10 rate of pupils. Next , Grammar school Use synonyms
also
had a fall variation during the beginning it had 24 rates of students and the ratio of them started to fall off Linking Words
at the
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end
.
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On the other hand
, the Vocabulary school had the highest ratio of pupils in 2000 , Linking Words
as well as
, it have a fluctuating trend in the middle of the year. Linking Words
Furthermore
, in the Linking Words
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end
it had a proportion of 20% of them in secondary Add a comma
,end
schools
. Use synonyms
In addition
, Community had an increased variation in the period. In the year ,2000 it had only 12% of the ratio , Linking Words
as well as
, it dramatically rise and had 58% of them.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: Replace the words schools, end with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 3 times.
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