The chart shows the results of survey about people coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian countries.

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about the habits of coffee and tea purchasing and consuming in Sidney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.

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The chart shows the results of survey about people coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian countries.

Nowadays, more people are going to the gym to stay fit. Discuss the benefits and potential drawbacks of this trend.

Nowadays more tasks at home and work are being performed by robots. Why do you think this is happenung? Is it a positive or negative development?

Many manufactured food and drinkproducts contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

Schools should do more to teach students about their health and wellbeing.