The chart shows the results of survey about people coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian countries.

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The chart illustrates the percentage of people,

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about the habits of coffee and tea purchasing and consuming in Sidney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.

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25 words

4.50

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Lexical resource: 6.0

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